Link https://youtu.be/YBXyT8m-ank
Reflection: I definitely saw that my mentioning of the ease of use and ease of mind were a good choice of words to use, so I kept them in. At first I thought it was a little cliche to use words like that in a pitch but in my feedback, they thought it was a good way to market the product. Also mentioning the price of the product was an important part of the pitch my feedback agreed on.
What did you change: I definitely felt more relaxed in this pitch and I felt it was more fluid and natural overall. I was definitely more comfortable in front of the camera this time around.
I relate to it being much easier than before. In my first elevator pitch, I was pretty nervous, but for this one, I was much more relaxed and knew the script by now. This pitch was more polished than the previous ones and keeping in the words was a good call as well. Also mentioning the price of the product was a smart idea as well. Overall an excellent job.
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